2019年6月1日雅思考试写作回顾
　　小作文: bar chart

　　大作文: Human activities have hurt plants and animals. Some think it is too late to take any measure while others believe we could take effective actions to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　    1. 本次考试难度中等。
　　2. 整体分析:
　　Task 柱图，动态数据图，英国男女全职和非全职学生在三年的人数变化。
　　注意点：1.筛选关键数据并以清晰的次序进行描写 2.句型灵活多样性
　　趋势变化表达：
　　1.变化主题(a type of students) V(变化) 数据
　　2变化主题(a type of students) see/experience/witness a/an n(变化) 数据
　　3.A/an n (变化) be seen /found in a type of students 数据
　　4.时间段 see/experience/witness a/an n(变化) in a type of students 数据
　　5.There be a/an n(变化) in a type of students 数据
　　3. Task2：动植物保护话题，
　　题目翻译：人类活动会对动植物有消极影响。有人认为保护动植物为时已晚，而有人认为可以采取有效的措施来改善，讨论双方观念并且给出你的观点。
　　从题型上来讲，这是非常典型的“讨论双边”的新题目，文章结构分为四段，中间主体两段分别讨论双方观点，结尾段表明自己的观点，即
　　第一段 引言：描述题目背景
　　第二段: 讨论A方观点--- reasons why it is too late
　　第三段：讨论B方观点--- what effective measures we could do
　　第四段：总结：表明自己的观点。
　　Introduction：introduce the topic (species of animals and plants have declined continuously due to human activities arouse widespread concern).
　　Body1:
　　Ts: Some believe that it is too late to do anything about these negative effects on plants and animals..
　　Ss: 有些物种因为人们的活动(如：砍伐大片原始森林cut down enormous areas of rainforest，摧毁野生动物栖息地destroy wildlife habitats)已经灭绝(go extinct/die out), 无法再复活(come back to life)而且现有的很多破坏也是不可逆转的(irreversible))
　　Body2:
　　Ts: Other, however, hold a different view. They maintain that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.
　　Ss: 建立自然保护区(establish natural reserves)就可以拯救很多物种(save many endangered species like pandas, tigers, etc)还可以实施一些法律(enforce some laws)比如禁止濒危动物制品的买卖(ban the trade of products like animal skin and organs made from some rare species),可以很好的遏制捕猎行为(curb the poaching)
　　Conclusion：保护 wild animals and plants 刻不容缓(never too late to…)如果意识不到问题的严重性，情况只会越来越恶化(deteriorate if we fail to realise the urgent need of protecting wild plant and animals)。

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